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The maps show the improvements, which were planned to construct at ground floor of house.

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The maps show the improvements, which were planned to construct at ground floor of house. It is clearly seen from suggested changes that there will be a lot of erections to create convenience for living at the ground floor of a house. In the offered plan, internal doors, which are located on the north side of the hall and linking the hall with living room and kitchen, will be replaced next to entrance door. At the same time, one of the internal walls of living room has been planned to be demolished to make the room bigger. By doing so, in the middle of house, the stairs which go down to show storage will be enlarged in a L shape in the future. Eventually, future plan of a house offers to add furniture to kitchen room. Moreover, according to purposed changes, both entrance doors, which are on western-north and south sides of house, will remain unchanged.
The maps
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show
the improvements, which
were planned
to construct at
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ground floor
of
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house
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It is
clearly
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seen
from suggested
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changes
that there will be
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a lot of
erections to create convenience for living at the
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ground floor
of a
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house
.

In the offered plan, internal doors, which
are located
on the north side of the hall and linking the hall with living room and kitchen, will
be replaced
next
to entrance door. At the same time, one of the internal walls of living room has
been planned
to
be demolished
to
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make
the room bigger. By doing
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so
, in the middle of
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house
, the stairs which go down to
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show
storage will
be enlarged
in
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a
L shape in the future.
Eventually
, future plan of a
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house
offers to
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add
furniture to kitchen room.

Moreover
, according to purposed
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changes
, both entrance doors, which are on western-north and south sides of
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house
, will remain unchanged.
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IELTS academic The maps show the improvements, which were planned to construct at ground floor of house.

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