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How to be good members of society

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A child's education has never been about learning information and basic skills only, it has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone. In order tobe good member of any society the individual must respect and obey that rules of their community and share their values. Educating children to understand the need to obey rules and respect others always begins in the home and is widely thought to be the responsibility of parents. They will certainly be the first to help children learn what is important in life how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world. But to be a valuable member of any community is not like learning a simple skill. It is something that an individual goes on learning throughoutlife and it is the responsibility of every member of society to take responsibility for helping the younger generation to become active and able members of the society.
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IELTS academic How to be good members of society

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5.5
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