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Student should be limited to access the internet because some of the are target of cyberbullying

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Living in modern era with advanced technology can make people easy to access everything on the internet. However, the amount of time that people spend on the internet should be limited especially young generations. This is because there are some individuals believe that most of them become the target of the internet crime such as cyberbullying. Personally, I agree with this statement and it will discuss in the next paragraph. Having a free to access the internet can make people easy to find everything that they want to get. This is why limited the time for the youngest is very important. For example, nowadays people are living in pandemic covid-19 era and this pandemic affect to all of human activities such as the way student study or learn the lessons from their school. When their parents do not control with their activity, some of them using this moment in wrong way such as posting their foto on the internet. As a result, they will get bullying from their friends from the internet and their mental health will be affected from this regards. I believe that parents should be more responsible with their children activities. In other words, they have to control their child behaviour. To sum up, I believe that accessing to the internet good for everyone, epsecially the students because they can get information that they want to help their study. However, limiting the time to access the internet is essential as well to the student because it can reduce the impact of the internet such as cyber crime.

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