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the tables below shows number of fairtrade-labelled in coffee and bananas in five countries in European between 1999 and 2004

the tables below shows number of fairtrade-labelled in coffee and bananas in five countries in European between 1999 and 2004 G9EAB

The tables provide information about five countries in European sale the amount of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas, in millions of euros, in 1999 and 2004. Overall, while sales of bananas increased in Switzerland, the UK, and Belgium and decreased in Sweden and Denmark, coffee sales showed a climb in all five countries. Switzerland bought far more bananas than any of other countries in both years, with increases significantly from 15 to 47 millions euros. Bananas sale in the UK and Belgium also rising up to 5. 5 and 4 million euros respectively, whereas sales in Sweden and Denmark were dropped dramatically to 1 and 0. 9 million euros respectively. Only 1. 5 million euro of coffee was bought in the UK, and then reached to the peak at around 20 million euros in 2004, which was the highest across the five countries in that years. Although Switzerland was the biggest coffee buyer in 1999 with 3 million euros, this figure showed small growth to 6 million euros in 2004. Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden were also brought more coffee in 2004, but their increases were slightly to 2, 1, 7, and 1 respectively. Sweden sales a number of fairtrade- labelled coffee in 2004 at around 1 million euros and remained the same in bananas.

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