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The graph display show usual sales of selected food items at the Vista cafe by season

The graph display show usual sales of selected food items at the Vista cafe by season EqAM3
Overall it can be seen regular sales of hot coffee constituted measured in where iced coffee sold list in winter and hot in summer however the significant variations can be noticed in selling of all food items over the seasons. Invented the percentage of coffee is highest 70% and it was highest sale overall the season as to coffee is lowest sale in winter and its percentage is only 2% icecream sale is good in winter that % discount 25 soup is on second number in all season that percentage is 750 50% last one is celestial are that's percentage is 25In summer the hot coffee feel fell on 30% and ice cream is located at 40% and icecream increased by 10% the percentage of soup is 25 and last one is said it remain same in both season.
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is 750 50% last one is celestial are that's
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IELTS academic The graph display show usual sales of selected food items at the Vista cafe by season

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