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Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below. You should write at least 150 words.

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The graphs indicate a report about a university lecturer. Overall when we take a look at the graphs, we see a number of diseases are the most spread, while others are less. The first sickness is AIDS. The number of deaths because of this disease is about 0. 3 million, whereas the Medical research funding is 175 million. The second illness is Leprosy with around 0. 2 million deaths, however the Medical research funding is approximately 80 millions according to the graphs. The third disease is Tropical Diseases with about 0. 4 million deaths, on the other hand, the Medical research funding is 85 million. The fourth illness is Diarrhoe. The death due to this sikcness is precisely 0. 5 million patients. The Medical research funding is about 60 million. The fifth disease is Malaria. This disease caused approximately 0. 3 million deaths, while the Medical research funding is exactly 50 million. The sixth and the last illness is TB. This disease caused the most deaths in Someland with approximately 1. 7 million in 1990. The Medical reseach funding is however, much less. It is around 30 million.
The graphs indicate a report about a university lecturer.

Overall
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is about 0. 3
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million
, whereas the
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Medical
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research
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funding
is 175
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million
. The second illness is Leprosy with around 0. 2
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million
deaths,
however
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Medical
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research
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funding
is approximately 80
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millions
according to the graphs. The third
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disease
is Tropical
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with about 0. 4
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million
deaths,
on the other hand
, the
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Medical
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research
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funding
is 85
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million
. The fourth illness is
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Diarrhoe
. The death due to this
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sikcness
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0. 5
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million
patients. The
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Medical
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research
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funding
is about 60
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million
. The fifth
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disease
is Malaria. This
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disease
caused approximately 0. 3
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million
deaths, while the
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Medical
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research
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funding
is exactly 50
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million
. The sixth and the last illness is TB. This
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disease
caused the most deaths in
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Someland
with approximately 1. 7
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million
in 1990. The
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Medical
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reseach
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funding
is
however
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IELTS academic Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graphs below.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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