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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013 28Lx
The bar graph illustrates the data from the year 2003, 2006 and 2013 about percentage of people in the USA often eat fast food in restaurants. In general, people eat fast food one a week in relatively popular in 2003 and 2006, while in 2013 the trend of eating one or twice a month is high. The people who ate every and and who never ate at restaurants are very less which is less than 5%. In detail, people who eat fast food once a week is 31 percent in 2003 which significantly surged to 33 percent in 2006, however, in 2013 it plummet to 27 percent. 30 percent people ate once or twice a month in 2003 which seen remarkable nosedive to 25% in 2006, but it has increased dramatically in 2013. People who ate several time a week is high in the year 2006 compare with 2003 and 2013 which is 17% and 16 % respectively. In 2003, people who ate fast food few times a year is 13% which raised to 15 percent in 2006 and remain constant in 2013. The people who eat fast food daily in restaurants and one who never ate are below 5% in all three years.
The bar graph illustrates the data from the
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2003, 2006 and 2013 about percentage of
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in the USA
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at restaurants are
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less which is less than 5%.

In detail,
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once a week is 31
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in 2003 which
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in 2006,
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. 30
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once or twice a month in 2003 which
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2006 compare with 2003 and 2013 which is 17% and 16 %
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few times a
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is 13% which raised to 15
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in 2006 and remain constant in 2013. The
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daily in restaurants and one
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never
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are below 5% in all three years.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013

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