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Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below. You should write at least 150 words.

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The graph indicates an information about a university lecturer. Overall, when we take a look at the picture, we can easily see that there was a significiant differences between the genders. However, they have approached to each other over the years. At the beginning of the graph, men's rates of smoking were on the top with precisely 600 % in 1960. On the other hand, women's ratios of smoking were less compared to men's. Women's rates of smoking have some fluctations. However, it has increased aproximately to 310 % in 1975. Then after, men's proportion's of smoking were exactly 300 %. After that both of them have decreased to between 200-300 % in 1995. Although at first men's ratios of smoking were much more than women's, in the end of the graph their proportions of smoking were almost the same
The graph indicates an information about a university lecturer.

Overall
, when we take a look at the picture, we can
easily
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see
that there was a
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significiant
differences between the genders.
However
, they have approached to each other over the years.

At the beginning of the graph,
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men's
rates of
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smoking
were on the top with
precisely
600 % in 1960.
On the other hand
, women's ratios of
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smoking
were less compared to
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men's
. Women's rates of
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smoking
have
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some
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fluctations
.
However
, it has increased
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aproximately
to 310 % in 1975. Then after,
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men's
proportion's of
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smoking
were exactly 300 %. After that both of them have decreased to between 200-300 % in 1995. Although at
first
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men's
ratios of
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smoking
were much more than women's, in the
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end
of the graph their proportions of
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smoking
were almost the
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same
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IELTS academic Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
139 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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