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The graph below indicates the information throughout the Arab World. Overall, every one of the coutries has got their own computers and internet amount for per 1000 inhabitants. The amount of computers and internet are flexible. İt can be various for every county which gives on the graph. The first country is Egypt which is one of the poor countries for given items in the Arab World. İt has almost 10 computers and internet for per 1000 inhabitants. The second country is Jordan. Computers and internet amount different from each other. Computers is 45 and internet is 48 respectively. The third countr is Kuwait with around 125 computers and 100 internet. The fourth country is Lebonan. Lebonan's internet more thant its computers amount. Computers are 50 and internet is approximately 65 respectively. The fifth country is Morocco. Morocco is another poor country both of the item on this graph. İt has about 10 computers and internet for per 1000 inhabitants. The sixth country is Oman with around 47 computers and 49 internet for every per 1000 inhabitants. The seventh country is S. Arabia. İts internet is not enough for its computers amount. Computers are about 60. However, internet is nearly 5. The eigth country us Syria. Syria has around 9 computers for around 2 internet. The ninth and last coutnry is UAE. UAE is top of the countries in the Arab World as graph shows so. İts internet is even almost as twice and half as its computers amount. Computers are aproximately 160 and internet is around 348.
The graph below indicates the information throughout the Arab World.

Overall
, every one of the
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coutries
has
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their
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computers and internet
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amount
for per 1000 inhabitants. The
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amount
of computers and internet are flexible.
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İt
can be various for every county which gives on the graph.

The f
irst
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is Egypt which is one of the poor
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countries
for g
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items in the Arab World.
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İt
has almost 10 computers and internet for per 1000 inhabitants.

The second
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is Jordan. Computers and internet
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di
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rom each other. Computers
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is
45 and internet is 48
respectively
.

The third
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countr
is Kuwait with
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around
125 computers and 100 internet.

The fourth
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country
is
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Lebonan
.
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Lebonan
's internet more
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thant
its computers
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amount
. Computers are 50 and internet is approximately 65
respectively
.

The fifth
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is Morocco. Morocco is another poor
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both of the item on this graph.
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İt
has about 10 computers and internet for per 1000 inhabitants.

The sixth
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is Oman with
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47 computers and 49 internet for every per 1000 inhabitants.

The seventh
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is S. Arabia.
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İts
internet is not enou
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its computers
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. Computers are about 60. Howe
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nearly
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The
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eigth
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country
us Syria. Syria has
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around
9 computers for
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around
2 internet.

The ninth and last
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coutnry
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is
UAE. UAE is top of the
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countries
in the Arab World as graph show
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s so.
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internet is even almost as twice and half as its computers
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. Computers are
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aproximately
160 and internet is
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around
348.
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