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comparisons of global sale of hybrid vehiles in Japan, the US and other countries from 2006 to 2009.

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The chart demonstrates the number of hybrid vehicles sold from 2006 to 2009 worldwide. In Japan, the number of sales slowly increased from over 50, 000 in 2006 to nearly 100, 000 in 2008. Then, there was a rapid jump in sales to over 325, 000, the highest number, in 2009. In the US, there was a significant rise of round 100, 000 in sales from over 250, 000 to 350, 000 between 2006 and 2007. It then gradually declined to more than 275, 000 in 2009. The least number of sales was in other countries, which slightly went up from over 50, 000 to almost 125, 000 from 2006 to 2009. Overall, the total sales of hybrid vehicles rose over the 4-year period, which was 360, 000 in 2006, then over doubled to 740, 000 in the last year of the period.
The chart demonstrates the
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of hybrid vehicles sold from 2006 to 2009 worldwide.

In Japan, the
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of
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sales
slowly
increased from
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50, 000 in 2006 to
nearly
100, 000 in 2008. Then, there was a rapid jump in
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sales
to
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325, 000, the highest
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, in 2009.

In the US, there was a significant rise of round 100, 000 in
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sales
from
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over
250, 000 to 350, 000 between 2006 and 2007. It then
gradually
declined to more than 275, 000 in 2009.

The least
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number
of
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sales
was in other countries, which
slightly
went up from
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over
50, 000 to almost 125, 000 from 2006 to 2009.

Overall
, the total
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sales
of hybrid vehicles rose
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over
the 4-year period, which was 360, 000 in 2006, then
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doubled to 740, 000 in the last year of the period.
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IELTS academic comparisons of global sale of hybrid vehiles in Japan, the US and other countries from 2006 to 2009.

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