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The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future. OKV7
This diagram shows Australia's water supply system that have been used now and in the future. It is clear from the diagram that, three type of water are used in different stages of the water supply system. According to what is shown, the dam or storage area is the main source of the pure water that supply all city building such as shops, houses, and factories. However, the city waste is go to directly to the water treatment plant. In addition, if the storm happen in the city the all extra storm water is go to directly to the River. In other hand, the water treatment plant is the hart of the water supply system. Because, it is collecting the all waste water from both storage and city facility, then treat these huge amount of waste water to reused. To sum up, we could say this water supply system is realy super and doing fantastic job where each part of this system is realy important.
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Australia's
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that have been
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used
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now
and in the future. It is
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clear
from the diagram that, three type of
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are
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used
in
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different
stages of the
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system.

According to what
is shown
, the dam or storage area is the main source of the pure
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water
that
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supply
all city building such as shops,
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houses
, and factories.
However
, the city waste is
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to
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to the
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treatment plant.
In addition
, if the storm happen in the city the all extra storm
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water
is go to
directly
to the River.

In other hand, the
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treatment plant is the hart of the
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water
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supply
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system
.
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Because
, it is collecting the all waste
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from both storage and city facility, then treat these huge amount of waste
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water
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to reused
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To sum up, we could say this
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is
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super and doing fantastic job where each part of this
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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