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Male and female teachers in six different types of educational settings in the UK in 2010

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The graph illustrates the male and female teachers in six different types of educational settings in the UK in the year 2010. Units are given in percentages. Overall, there are more educational settings, in which women outnumber men. The most significant difference is in a nursery or pre-school setting, where more than 90% of teachers are women. In college, the ratio of male and female teachers is equal. The educational settings, in which women outnumber men, are in nurseries or pre-schools, primary schools, and secondary schools. In secondary schools, the number differs only by about 5 percent, while in the others, the contrast is very drastic. More men tend to work in private training institutes or in universities then women. The setting, in which women are the most outnumbered is in universities. In private training institutes, the difference is very slight.
The graph illustrates the male and female teachers in six
different
types of educational
settings
in the UK in the year 2010. Units are
given
in percentages.

Overall
, there are more educational
settings
, in which
women
outnumber
men
. The most significant difference is in a nursery or
pre-school
setting
, where more than 90% of teachers are
women
. In college, the ratio of male and female teachers is equal.

The educational
settings
, in which
women
outnumber
men
, are in nurseries or
pre-schools
, primary schools, and secondary schools. In secondary schools, the number differs
only
by about 5 percent, while in the others, the contrast is
very
drastic.

More
men
tend to work in private training institutes or in universities then
women
. The
setting
, in which
women
are the most outnumbered is in universities. In private training institutes, the difference is
very
slight.
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IELTS academic Male and female teachers in six different types of educational settings in the UK in 2010

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