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The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. ojEV

The line graph reveals the information about four multinational museums visited from 1980 to 2015. It can be seen that there were 2 museums both of which achieved incredible and slight rise respectively as the rest of them could not increase. First of all, it is clear from the data that the Vatican Museum obtained nearly a twofold growth, whose figures firstly were just under 5 million and at the end of the period reached around 9 million visitors. In 1980 the Louvre Museum was dominant with the huge difference and its rank did not change for 35 years although it decreased between 1995 and 2000. The number of visitors was almost 8 million people at the beginning of the period and it reached 10 million individuals. On the other hand, the London Science Museum is the only museum that fell down nearly double. After remaining steady (4 million) in the first 5 years, the amount of comers there went down by almost 2 million. Besides, at first the visitors of the Shenzhen Museum was just under 4 million and its chunk was followed at the same share in 2015.

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museums
 visited from 1980 to 2015. It can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that there were 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
museums
 both of which achieved incredible and slight rise respectively
 as the rest of them could not increase.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the data that the Vatican You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
Museum
 obtained nearly
 a twofold growth, whose figures firstly
 were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 under 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 and at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period reached around 9 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 visitors. In 1980 the Louvre You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
Museum
 was dominant with the huge difference and its rank did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 for 35 years although it decreased between 1995 and 2000. The number of visitors was almost 8 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 at the beginning of the period and it reached 10 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 individuals.

On the other hand
, the London Science You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
Museum
 is the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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museum
 that fell down nearly
 double. After remaining steady (4 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million)
 in the first
 5 years, the amount of comers there went down by almost 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
. Besides
, at first
 the visitors of the Shenzhen You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
Museum
 was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 under 4 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 and its chunk was followed
 at the same share in 2015. 