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Write a paragraph of self-introduction of at least 150 words

Write a paragraph of self-introduction of at least 150 words q0rka
Hello everyone. Today, i would like to tell you about myself. My full name is Vu Mai Lan. I am eighteen years old. There are five people in my family. There are my mother, my father, my sister, my brother and me. My hometown is Hai Phong. I am a first year student at the university of finance business administration and my major is finance. My hobbies are reading books, making handicraft and surfing the internet. Reading is such a good habit which healthy for your brain and keeps your brain functioning actively. I can spend hours reading and it makes me feel relaxed after many long stressful hours at school. I am an introvert. I like the tranquility. I don’t like interacting with strangers because it makes me feel uncomfortable. I think that i am bad-tempered, rather reserved and self-effacing. I think i should change a bit. That all information about me. Thanks for listening
Hello everyone.
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i
would like to
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tell
you about myself. My full name is
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Vu
Mai
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Lan
. I am eighteen years
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. There are five
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people
in my family. There are my mother, my father, my sister, my brother and me. My hometown is
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Hai
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Phong
. I am a
first
year student at the university of finance business administration and my major is finance. My hobbies are reading books, making handicraft and surfing the internet. Reading is such a
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good
habit which healthy for your brain and
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keeps
your brain functioning
actively
. I can spend hours reading and it
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makes
me feel relaxed after
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many
long stressful hours at school. I am an introvert.
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I
like the tranquility.
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I
don’t like interacting with strangers
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because
it
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makes
me feel uncomfortable.
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I
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that
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i
am
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bad
-tempered,
rather
reserved and self-effacing.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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think
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i
should
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change
a bit. That all information about me. Thanks for
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listening

IELTS academic Write a paragraph of self-introduction of at least 150 words

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
155 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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