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The table show the number of mobile phones and PC per 1000 people in 2003bin 6 various conutries.

The table show the number of mobile phones and PC per 1000 people in 2003bin 6 various conutries. x8o09
The tabular data represents the number of mobile phones and personal computers every 1000 mankind in 2003 in different six nations. Overall, it can be clearly seen that Luxemburg had the highest number of people of computer and phones holders. While, the least proportion of ownership of laptop and mobile was China. To commence with, Luxemburg had around 872 and 900 ownership of phones and PC in the 2003. Furthermore, in the same year, in Italy, total number of mobile holders accounted at roughly 737 per 1000, while this rate for PC owners plummeted by 300. In addition, the ownership of mobile and PC in the Singapore remained stagnant. It was clearly observed at 690. On the other hand, Germany had nearly 200 higher number of ownership of mobile phones than South Korea per thousand in 2003. Moreover, The rate of owned PC per 1000 in Germany and South Korea remained same. It accounted to be 452. At the end, the holders of PC was observed almost more than double than users of phone in china. It calculated nearby 88 per 1000.
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and PC in the 2003.
Furthermore
, in the same year, in Italy, total
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of mobile holders accounted at roughly 737 per 1000, while this rate for PC owners plummeted by 300.
In addition
, the
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of mobile and PC in the Singapore remained stagnant. It was
clearly
observed at 690.
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nearly
200 higher
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than South Korea per thousand in 2003.
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, The rate of
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PC per 1000 in Germany and South Korea remained same. It accounted to be 452. At the
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, the holders of PC
was observed
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china
. It calculated nearby 88 per 1000.
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