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Write a paragraph of about 130 – 150 words about one of your UNFORGETTABLE MEMORIES. Explain why this memory is important to you, and speculate as to why you remember it well. – GRAMMAR B2

Write a paragraph of about 130 – 150 words about one of your UNFORGETTABLE MEMORIES. Explain why this memory is important to you, and speculate as to why you remember it well. – GRAMMAR B2 PLWGw
It comes as no surprise that there are many unforgettable memories in school time that make constant impressions on them. Similarly, I have a lot of memorable moments of being a student, but being kicked out of my class is the first one turning up in my mind whenever I think of my past day. I still remember that it was in an English class when I was in Grade 7. While I was making primary concentrations on my teacher’s lesson, I made a row with a boy next table because of some silly reason that I didn’t keep in mind. After that, we made a fuss; as a result, we all kicked out of the class, which led me to be astonished since I hadn’t been punished before. Then, we even didn’t talk to each other until a week later. That embarrassing moment was really one of my most immensely influential events that gave me the impression that I hadn’t been a child so I had to act maturely.
It
comes
as no surprise that there are
many
unforgettable memories in school time that
make
constant impressions on them.
Similarly
, I have
a lot of
memorable moments of being a student,
but
being kicked
out of my
class
is the
first
one turning up in my mind whenever I
think
of my past day. I
still
remember that it was in an English
class
when I was in Grade 7. While I was making primary concentrations on my teacher’s lesson, I made a row with a boy
next
table
because
of
some
silly reason that I didn’t
keep
in mind. After that, we made a fuss;
as a result
, we all kicked out of the
class
, which led me to
be astonished
since I hadn’t
been punished
before
. Then, we even didn’t talk to each other until a week later. That embarrassing moment was
really
one of my most
immensely
influential
events
that gave me the impression that I hadn’t been a child
so
I had to act
maturely
.
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IELTS academic Write a paragraph of about 130 – 150 words about one of your UNFORGETTABLE MEMORIES. Explain why this memory is important to you, and speculate as to why you remember it well. – GRAMMAR B2

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
170 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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