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The given map shows the changes of the village between 1995 and present.

The given map shows the changes of the village between 1995 and present. kxey8
The given map shows the changes of the village between 1995 and present. Overall, the village experienced big changes with the most noticeable being the disappearance of forest and farm land. It can be seen that some of new structures are added and replaced now compared to the past. In 1995, in the east of the village, it was the place where farmland located, forest could be seen situated next to farmland. There were a few shops and a fish market lying along the road near the beach. Now, there are a lot of changes in the village. The farmland is replaced to make a way for the golf, while the forest is cut down to build tennis courts. The road is expanded toward the west of the village, following that the more houses are erected along the side of the road. Some apartments are built on the place which was position of fish market, which means this market being disappearing. The shops which used to be at the opposite of the market are replaced by restaurants. The car park is added next to the hotel while the hotel and coffee shop are still remained during the period.
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shows
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changes
of the
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village
between 1995 and present.

Overall
, the
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village
experienced
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big
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changes
with the most noticeable being the disappearance of forest and farm land. It can be
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seen
that
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some
of new structures are
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added
and replaced
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now
compared to the past.

In 1995, in the east of the
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village
, it was the place where farmland located, forest could be
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seen
situated
next
to farmland. There were a few shops and a fish
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market
lying along the road near the beach.

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Now
, there are
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a lot of
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changes
in the
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village
. The farmland
is replaced
to
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make
a way for the golf, while the forest is
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cut
down to build tennis courts. The road
is expanded
toward the west of the
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village
, following that the more
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houses
are erected
along the side of the road.
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Some
apartments
are built
on the place which was position of fish
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market
, which means this
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market
being disappearing. The shops which
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used
to be at the opposite of the
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market
are replaced
by restaurants. The car park is
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added
next
to the hotel while the hotel and coffee shop are
still
remained during the period.
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IELTS academic The given map shows the changes of the village between 1995 and present.

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  American English
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198 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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