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Pie chart food consumption in 2014

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The pie chart shows percentage of different type of food consumed worldwide in 2014. Overall, meat is the most consumed food in the chart followed by fish. To begin with, the most consumed food is meat with over a third 31 percent. The second most consumed food is fish with 21, 9 percent. The two food which have the same proportions are fruits and veggies, fruits represents 10, 6 per cent followed with veggies at 10, 5 per cent whereas the least consumed type of food in the charts bread and rice. bread at 5. 5 percent and rice at 2. 5 percent only. To sum up, the most consumed type of food in 2014 are animal-based food (fish and meat) when other type of food are least consumed.
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