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The chart shows percentage of people several times ate fast foods in restaurants between 2003 and 2013 in the USA

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The bar chart illustrates the number of people who ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 and 2013 in the USA. Overall, it is clear that percentage of people who ate fast food several times a week in 2003 was signicantly higher than every day. Additionally, in 2013, 34%people ate fast foods in restaurants. In 2003, 4%individual ate fast foods several times a week. The figure was increased sharply to 15% in 2003. But, 31%people chose ate fast foods once a week. After that, followed by sudden drop at 30% and 14%individuals ate fast foods a few times a year in the rastaurants. Meanwhile, 4%people never ate fast foods in restaurants between 2003 and 2013. To begin with 2006, it can be noticed that 34%individual ate in fast food restaurants in the USA. But, it was suddenly dropped to 25%. In 2013, people ate in fast food restaurants once or twise a month was increased rapidly of the other forms 15% humans ate fast food a few times a year in 2013.
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IELTS academic The chart shows percentage of people several times ate fast foods in restaurants between 2003 and 2013 in the USA

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