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The graph shows some problems people get when they move to a new country and how matters vary according to people’s ages. In general, it is obvious that all age groups experience the same difficulties to some extent, but the percentage of the middle age group who have problems is the highest compared with the other age groups. The greatest trouble for the middle aged is arranging finances, a problem experienced by 35 percent of the people in this age group. However, 34 percent of 18- to 34-year-olds find this matter hard, while even fewer people over 55 (29 percent) have this problem. 37 percent of 35- to 54-year-olds find assorting the service of providing medical care the most problematic. In comparison, the oldest age group finds this easier, at 36 percent, while the percentage of the youngest age group who have this problem is fewest, with 32 percent. In contrast to their sorting out healthcare difficulties, only 2 percent of people over 55 have trouble finding schools for their children, and 6 percent of young people aged 18 to 34 meets this difficulty. However, this is the biggest problem for people aged 35 to 54, with 19 percent.
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of 35- to 54-year-olds find assorting the service of providing medical care the most problematic.
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