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The charts below show the results of a survey that asked customers in the Vinpearl Hotel how they rate Hotel’s service.

The charts below show the results of a survey that asked customers in the Vinpearl Hotel how they rate Hotel’s service. KlD9M
The charts below show the results of a survey that asked customers in the Vinpearl Hotel how they rate Hotel’s service. Overall, what stand outs is that the percentage of all rating positive dramatically increased over the period given. Besides, the figure for negative rating saw an oppsite trend was a remarkable drop. In 2010, the propotion of rating on satisfactory by visitors was the highest, accounting for 45% of total answers. While with the percentage for poor was 21% and for very poor was 15%. Whereas, only 19% in total gave positive feedback, including good(14%) and excellent(5%). After five year, the proportions of customer who described the hotel’s service as “good” and “excellent” grew significantly to 39% and 28% respectively, occupy the first position. By contrast, the figure of “satisfactory”, “poor” and “very poor” was a drastical fall and the smallest percentage was the “very poor” of the service with 4%.
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trend was a remarkable drop.

In 2010, the
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of rating on satisfactory by visitors was the highest, accounting for 45% of total answers. While with the percentage for
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was 21% and for
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very
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poor
was 15%. Whereas,
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19% in total gave
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positive
feedback, including
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good
(14%) and excellent(5%).

After five year, the proportions of customer who
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described
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” and “excellent” grew
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, occupy the
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position. By contrast, the figure of “satisfactory”,
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“poor”
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very
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was a
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fall and the smallest percentage was the “
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of the service with 4%.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the results of a survey that asked customers in the Vinpearl Hotel how they rate Hotel’s service.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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