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Write 150 words.table gives information about underground railway systems in 6 cities

Write 150 words. table gives information about underground railway systems in 6 cities Yd33j
The table provides data on the underground rail networks in six major cities. The table compares the age, size and the passengers per year among the six cities. Overall, it is evident that the railway systems which are the oldest, are most extensive and carries much greater passenges than the newer ones. The oldest underground network in London, having opened in 1863, is the biggest in size with 394 kms of route. While being in the third position in terms of size, Tokyo rail network is most used with the highest amount of passengers which is 1927 millions per year. Moreover, among the three newer underground systems, Kyoto carries only 45 million per year, which is the lowest among six systems. Washington DC, having 126 kms of route, carries 144 million per year which is definitely greater compared to other newer systems, having only 11 kms & 28 kms respectively for Kyoto & Los Angeles.
The table provides data on the underground rail networks in six major cities.

The table compares the age, size and the passengers per year among the six cities.
Overall
, it is evident that the railway
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systems
which are the oldest, are most extensive and carries much greater
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passenges
than the newer ones.

The oldest underground network in London, having opened in 1863, is the
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biggest in size
with 394
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kms
of route. While being in the third position in

terms of size, Tokyo rail network is most
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used
with the highest amount of passengers which is 1927 millions per year.

Moreover
, among the three newer underground
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systems
, Kyoto carries
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only
45 million per year, which is the lowest among six
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systems
. Washington DC, having 126
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kms
of route, carries 144 million per year which is definitely greater compared to other newer
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systems
, having
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only
11
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kms
& 28
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kms
respectively
for Kyoto & Los Angeles.
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IELTS academic Write 150 words. table gives information about underground railway systems in 6 cities

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