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he bar chart shows the literacy rate of males and females in six states of the country in 1990 and 2000.

he bar chart shows the literacy rate of males and females in six states of the country in 1990 and 2000. JKAmw
The bar graph gives data about difference in litrecy rates of both male and female in six states of a country in 1990 and 2000. In state A, there is a similar rise in rates for both genders, where man and women both share 5% of rise each in that years. Next is state B where male and female share similar count of nearly 80 for 1990 and it rose up to more than 85 some what at 88 in 2000 for both genders. State C has the highest litrecy rates for men in both years which is close to 90 however, women in this state has not so good numbers recorded in year 1990 but it show a huge rise in 2000 as data grows from 69 to 78%. In state D man 10% of gap in both year the samr thing goes for women also. For state E, man has 80% and 84% count in 1990 and 2000 respectively and in case of women it see good rise in 2000 compare to 1990. State F also showed nearly 9% gain in noth genders. It stood up at 58% for men and 39% for women in 2000.
The bar graph gives data about difference in
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litrecy
rates of both male and female in six
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states
of a country in 1990 and 2000.

In
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state
A, there is a similar
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rise
in rates for both genders, where
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man
and
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women
both share 5% of
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rise
each in that years.

Next
is
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state
B where male and female share similar count of
nearly
80 for 1990 and it rose up to more than 85
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some what
at 88 in 2000 for both genders.

State C has the highest
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litrecy
rates for
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men
in both years which is close to 90
however
,
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women
in this
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state
has not
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so
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good
numbers recorded in year 1990
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it
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show
a huge
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rise
in 2000 as data grows from 69 to 78%.

In
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state
D
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man
10% of gap in both year the
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samr
thing goes for
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women
also
. For
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state
E,
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man
has 80% and 84% count in 1990 and 2000
respectively
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and


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in
case of
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women
it
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see
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good
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rise
in 2000 compare to 1990.
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F
also
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showed
nearly
9% gain in
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noth
genders. It stood up at 58% for
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men
and 39% for
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women
in 2000.
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IELTS academic he bar chart shows the literacy rate of males and females in six states of the country in 1990 and 2000.

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