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Working hours of different professions

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The line graph and pie chart below compare various professionals in terms of weekly working hours and stress related issues due to these occupations. Overall, movie producers and business owners work more hours than all the given counterparts, while their percentage of stress is relatively small. On the other hand, lecturers suffer from the highest stress inspite of the fewest working hours. Although the proportion of working hours for film makers and businessmen accounts for 60 hours and 70 hours respectively, the rate of stress from these occupations is only 18%and 15%accordingly. However, lecturers who spend only 27 hours at work, the figure for stress afflict them is the highest (25%). On the other hand, programmers whose figure for stress from work is the lowest, they work 40 hours per week. Although lawyers devote 35 hours and writers about 46 hours weekly, the percentage of illness and tension caused by these professions are the same -8%.
The line graph and pie chart below compare various professionals in terms of weekly working
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and
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related issues due to these occupations.

Overall
, movie producers and business owners
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work
more
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hours
than all the
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given
counterparts, while their percentage of
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stress
is
relatively
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small
.
On the other hand
, lecturers suffer from the highest
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inspite
of the fewest working hours.

Although the proportion of working
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for film makers and businessmen accounts for 60
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and 70
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respectively
, the rate of
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stress
from these occupations is
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only
18%and 15%
accordingly
.

However
, lecturers who spend
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only
27
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at
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, the figure for
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afflict them is the highest (25%).

On the other hand
, programmers whose figure for
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from
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is the lowest, they
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40
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per week.

Although lawyers devote 35
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and writers about 46
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weekly, the percentage of illness and tension caused by these professions are the same -8%.
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