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The given chart shows reveals the information about the propotion of polulation in a developing country in 1990 and 2000, and other pie chart shows the information about males and females in the same year. It ca be observed from the chart that population of the boys in 1990 were the highest among all given type in the same year. Compare to that, in the year 2000, the number of boys were decreased 10% and settled to 25%. On the other hand, girls remained same in the both the years, and the number of it are 25%. From the table, it is can be noticed that there were 25% of children who were more than 10 years old in 1990. It had changed and reduced to 18% in 2000. Additionally, the number teenager was 18% in the 1990, but it had incresed to 20% in 2000. Finally, the numerical of 61 years or above years old people was equal or less than 5% in both the given years.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 chart This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 reveals the information about the Possible spelling mistake found.promotionproportionpro potion
propotion
 of Possible spelling mistake found.population
polulation
 in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :Third World countrylow-income country
developing country
 in 1990 and 2000, and other pie chart This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 the information about males and females in the same year.

It Possible typo. Did you mean "can"?can
ca
be observed
 from the chart that population of the boys in 1990 were the highest among all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 type in the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
. Compare to that, in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2000, the number of boys were decreased
 10% and settled to 25%. On the other hand
, girls remained same in the both the years, and the number of it are 25%.

From the table, it is can be noticed
 that there were 25% of children who were more than 10 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 in 1990. It had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 to 18% in 2000. Additionally
, the number This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenileadolescent
teenager
 was 18% in the 1990, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it had Possible spelling mistake found.increased
incresed
 to 20% in 2000.

Finally
, The phrase 'the numerical of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'the' and 'of'.
the numerical of
 61 years or above years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 was equal or less than 5% in both the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 years. 