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The line chart illustrates tge consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

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The line chart illustrates tge consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. The data has measured in Quadrillion units. Overall, it is clear seen that petrol amd oil showed a highest number of units. While, hydropower observed a lowest number of units. Moving to detail, the energy consumption of nuclear solar, wind and hydropower showed a similar pattern. In year 1980 both are still from 4 units and over the period the number of units was dramatically grown to till 2010. The hydropower will be level off nearly 4 Quadrillion units. Probing to further, the highest consumption of petrol and oil in ancient period was 35 units and utilization by fuel was some oscillation to till 2995 about 35 units. Add to more, 2005 the unit of petrol and oil will be steady incline about 49 unit. The coal and natural gas are showed some fluctuations. The unit of coal was dramatically progress be until over the period 2030 that was 30 units. Natural gas unit was dropped yo 1985 and then climb to till 2015 which was 25 unit. After 2015 the consumption natural fuel was remained static about 25 Quadrillion units.
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, hydropower observed
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lowest number of
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. Moving to detail, the energy
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consumption
of nuclear solar, wind and hydropower
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showed
a similar pattern. In year 1980 both are
still
from 4
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units
and over the period the number of
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was
dramatically
grown to till 2010. The hydropower will be level off
nearly
4 Quadrillion
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units
. Probing to
further
, the highest
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consumption
of petrol and oil in ancient period was 35
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units
and utilization by fuel was
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oscillation to till 2995 about 35
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units
.
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Add
to more, 2005 the
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of petrol and oil will be steady incline about 49
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. The coal and natural gas are
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showed
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fluctuations. The
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of coal was
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progress be until over the period 2030 that was 30
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. Natural gas
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was dropped
yo 1985 and then climb to till 2015 which was 25
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natural fuel
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IELTS academic The line chart illustrates tge consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

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