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The US top ten processed food export markets for last year and six years ago

The US top ten processed food export markets for last year and six years ago n10r2

The bar chart describes the US’ income from exporting processed food, which came from 10 countries consuming the most for the last year and 6 years ago. Overall, all countries in the bar chart had higher figures for last year than 6 years ago. Canada consumes much-processed food from the US, as a result, the expenditure was the highest for the last year and 6 years ago (at 13. 2B US$ and 9. 3B US$ respectively). The amount of processed food by the US is increasingly purchased by the Rest of the World, therefore, its expenditure rose nearly 5B US$ last year compared to 6 years ago (greater than 0. 2B US$). On the other hand, there are 7 countries whose expenditure remained under 5B US$ last year. 6 years ago, the order of countries whose markets consumed the least was as follows: Australia and Hong Kong, Philippines, China, South Korea, Japan, the European Union. Noticeably, Australia and Hong Kong were at the lowest 6 years ago, however, Australian values were greater than Hong Kong last year. In conclusion, Asian countries consumed less processed food from the US than Westerners.

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. 6 years ago, the order of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 whose markets consumed the least was as follows: Australia and Hong Kong, Philippines, China, South Korea, Japan, the European Union. Noticeably
, Australia and Hong Kong were at the lowest 6 years ago, however
, Australian values were greater than Hong Kong last year.

In conclusion
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 from the US than Westerners. 