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With the migration of people to cities in search of a better life, many rural areas are now underpopulated. What are some problems associated with a lack of people living and working in rural areas? What solutions could be proposed?

With the migration of people to cities in search of a better life, many rural areas are now underpopulated. What are some problems associated with a lack of people living and working in rural areas? What solutions could be proposed? 2bxGX
The given table graph demonstrates the information regarding sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas over the period 19999 and 2004 in five European countries. Overall, the most notable detail from the chart is that sale’ gap of coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 shown in the UK and Switzerland. To describe data at fairtrade- labelled coffee more in detail, the UK had shown the biggest sales from 1. 5 millions of euros in 1999 to 20 millions of euros in 2004. Switzerland doubled form 3 millions of euros to 6 millions of euros. However, sales gape of the other countries of Denmark, Belgium and Sweden grew minimally about 0. 2 millions of euros, 0. 7 millions of euros and 0. 2 millions of euros. In the other data at bananas, the number of Switzerland’s sales went up significantly from 15 millions of euros in 1999 to 47 millions of euros in 2004. In addition, the UK and Belgium grew from 1 million euros to 5. 5 millions of euros and from 0. 6 millions of euros to 4 millions of euros in 1999 and 2004. However, sales of Sweden and Denmark decreased from 1. 8 millions of euros to 1 million of euros and from 2 millions of euros to 0. 9 millions of euros at 1999 and 2004, which shown the declined in the chart only. (21분)
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IELTS academic With the migration of people to cities in search of a better life, many rural areas are now underpopulated. What are some problems associated with a lack of people living and working in rural areas? What solutions could be proposed?

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