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The diagram and chart beneath give data about deals and offer costs for Coca Cola.

The diagram and chart beneath give data about deals and offer costs for Coca Cola. VBPDw

The pie chart and line graph illustrate Coca Cola’s volume of deals which united different regions and the pay of fizzling Coca Cola in the year 2000. Overall, the American Continent was the biggest market for Coca Cola while its payment highly increased in this period. More specifically, the most volume of deals of Coca Cola was in North and Latin America which was 55 percent. In Europe had over 20 percent deals which is more than the Asia where had 15, 4 percent deals. The least amount of deals was in Africa and Middle East with only 7 percent. The total volume of deals were 17, 1 billion. Once more, the price of Coca Cola had been just 33 dollar in 1996, however this cost increased to 68 dollar in 1997. The peak was in 1998 by 75 dollar, but the price of Coca Cola constantly decreased to 48 dollar in 2000. An interesting point was the cost again rose to 55 dollar in 2001.

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Cola’s
 volume of deals which united This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 regions and the pay of fizzling Coca You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoda popsoda
Cola
 in the year 2000.

Overall
, the American Continent was the biggest market for Coca You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoda popsoda
Cola
 while its payment highly
 increased in this period.

More specifically
, the most volume of deals of Coca You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoda popsoda
Cola
 was in North and Latin America which was 55 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
. In Europe had over 20 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
 deals which is more than the Asia where had 15, 4 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
 deals. The least amount of deals was in Africa and Middle East with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 7 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
. The total volume of deals were 17, 1 billion.

Once more, the price of Coca You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoda popsoda
Cola
 had been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 33 Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: "dollars".dollars
dollar
 in 1996, however
 this cost increased to 68 Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: "dollars".dollars
dollar
 in 1997. The peak was in 1998 by 75 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
dollar
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the price of Coca You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoda popsoda
Cola
constantly
 decreased to 48 Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: "dollars".dollars
dollar
 in 2000. An interesting point was the cost again rose to 55 Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: "dollars".dollars
dollar
 in 2001. 