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Money spent on book on the Internet in the Uk.Books bought on the internet by UK Country

Money spent on book on the Internet in the Uk. Books bought on the internet by UK Country 3aWJY

The line graph provides information about the amount of money incurred on online book shopping in the UK from 1997 to 2002, while, the pie chart ilustrates four UK countries in terms of the proportion of books bought online. It obvious that the line graph spends money on books from the Internet significantly increased. The pie chart illustrates among the compared countries the England had highest percentage of buying books online than other 3 countries As we can see by line graph, in 1997, money spent on books on the internet was 10 million. Over the next three years, that number rose to 5 million, and in 2000 to around 25 million. Between 2000 and 2002, spending on books grew more slowly. The pie chart shows that the highest rate of online book purchases is 81 percent in England. The remaining 3 UK countries accounted for 10 percent in Wales, 8% in Scotland and 1% in Northern Ireland.

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 is 81 percent in England. The remaining 3 UK countries accounted for 10 percent in Wales, 8% in Scotland and 1% in Northern Ireland. 