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The graph below shows the concerns which affect governments and businesses when they make decisions about environmental policy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant,

The graph below shows the concerns which affect governments and businesses when they make decisions about environmental policy. YLklB
The bar graph illustrates the concerns influencing decision makings on governments and companies’ environmental policy. Analysis of the graph can be divided into three parts: affecting government more, affecting business more, and affecting evenly. To begin with the fields that are influencing government more, while legislation has the biggest percentage of importance for the government, which is slightly less than 30 %, it has only 15% for the business. In addition, costs relating to disposal also affects the government, which is 10%, twice more than business, 5 %. In media comment, the government has slightly higher percentage, 10%, than the business, just below 10%. Turning to the fields that are affecting business more, in saving energy and land property dealings, the percentage of business is dramatically higher, just over 25% and 10% respectively, than what it is of the government, around 13% and 5% each. Public concern for environment also has the higher percentage in business, exactly 15 %, and slightly under 15% in the counterpart. Lastly, costs of recycling and health and safety regulations have the exactly same percentage in both the government and the business, which are 15% and 5% respectively.
The bar graph illustrates the concerns influencing decision makings on
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governments
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companies
’ environmental policy. Analysis of the graph can
be divided
into three parts:
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affecting
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government
more,
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affecting
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business
more, and
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affecting
evenly
.

To
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begin
with the fields that are influencing
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government
more, while legislation has the biggest
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percentage
of importance for the
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government
, which is
slightly
less than 30 %, it has
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only
15% for the
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business
.
In addition
, costs relating to disposal
also
affects the
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government
, which is 10%, twice more than
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business
, 5 %. In media comment, the
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government
has
slightly
higher
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percentage
, 10%, than the
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business
,
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just
below 10%.

Turning to the fields that are
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affecting
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business
more, in saving energy and land property dealings, the
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percentage
of
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business
is
dramatically
higher,
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just
over 25% and 10%
respectively
, than what it is of the
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government
, around 13% and 5% each. Public concern for environment
also
has the higher
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percentage
in
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business
, exactly 15 %, and
slightly
under 15% in the counterpart.

Lastly
, costs of recycling and health and safety regulations have the exactly same
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percentage
in both the
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government
and the
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business
, which are 15% and 5%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the concerns which affect governments and businesses when they make decisions about environmental policy.

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