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The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period

The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period QLKDL
The table illustrates how many people visit to Ashdown Museum either year before or the year after restructuration, while the pie charts demonstrate results of replying this questtionarrie weither satisfied or dissatisfied when vistiors go to this meseum, during the same two periods. Overall, what stands out from the graph that the most populer proportion of visitor satisfaction surveys before refurbishment is experienced by satisfied; however, it is shown by dissatisfied after the refurbishment. Whereas the percentage of dissatisfaction register a decrease, the proportion of satisfaction witness a rise. As can be seen from the graph, dissatisfed rate of visitor result of surveys before refurbishment come top in rankings with a two-fifths (40%), followed by satisfied which has a rate of approximately a third (30%). Moreover, satisfied proportion of visitor result of surveys has most populer trend after restructuration, which account for 40%. On the other hand, the percentage of dissatisfed during the same two periods -year before refurbishment and year after refurbishment- decrease substantially from 40% to 15%, the proportion of very dissatisfied, however, decrease slowly, which stood at 10% and 5% respectively. Further, the rate of satisfied from before refurbishment to after refurbishment has a growth between 30% and 40%, respectively.
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