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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The diagram gives information about the way in which instant noodles are produced. Overall, the diagram consists of 8 processes. These processes start with storaging silos and end up with labelling and sealing. First of all, flour is put to silos for storaging, after that, water and oil is added to flour to mix up. Next, with the help of rollers dough sheets are made and turned into dough strips. Following this, noodles discs are prepared by dough strips and sended for cooking in oil and drying. In the subsequent stage, noodles are flavoured by vegetables and spices. Then, they are put into cups. Finally, cups undergo for labelling and sealing. Labels for instant noodles are put on the cups.
The diagram gives information about the way in which instant
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noodles
are produced
.

Overall
, the diagram consists of 8 processes. These processes
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start
with
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storaging
silos and
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end
up with labelling and sealing.

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First of all
, flour
is put
to silos for
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storaging
, after that, water and oil is
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added
to flour to mix up.
Next
, with the
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help
of rollers dough sheets
are made
and turned into dough strips. Following this,
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noodles
discs
are prepared
by dough strips and
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sended
for cooking in oil and drying.

In the subsequent stage,
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noodles
are
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flavoured
by vegetables and spices. Then, they
are put
into cups.
Finally
, cups undergo for labelling and sealing. Labels for instant
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noodles
are put
on the cups.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
120 words
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