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Knowledge and life skills are fundamental things required to have an up-and-coming career. But there is a lot of discussion about whether the authorities should shift towards a life-skills rather than keep the traditional one which pays much attention to knowledge. This essay attempts to advocate the former stance. In a modern world, young people tend to change jobs more recently than they do in the past. This means that no matter what you had learned in university or high school, it does not mean that you have to choose the correct subject that you study. What people gain from class is a great assistant helping them get the most general view about the world as well as themselves.

Knowledge and life This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 are fundamental things required to have an up-and-coming career. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 there is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 discussion about whether the authorities should shift towards a life-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
rather
 than This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 the traditional one which pays much attention to knowledge. This essay attempts to advocate the former stance.

In a modern world, young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 tend to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 jobs more recently than they do in the past. This means that no matter what you had learned in university or high school, it does not mean that you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 choose the correct subject that you study. What This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 gain from This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 is a great assistant helping them This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the most general view about the world as well
 as themselves. 