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The diagram show how olive oil is produced

The diagram show how olive oil is produced pKjkL

The pictorial representation illustrate the way of in which olive oil is yielded. Starting from the picking of only from trees and culminating to trading and kept oil into a space. Overview makes it conspicuous that each and every step involved in process is mandatory if any step is missed the whole process would halt. It is vividly infrared that a person took all is from tree and kept it into bucket. Followed by the balls of all is are cleaned by rinsing with cold water then with a system of rectangular belt it displayed on circular top machine. Furthermore, it smashing in equipment which consists of two pipes. From one pipe the olive residue are thrown and from alternative pipethe paste of olive is came. In the subsequent States the paste is stored in bag with holes. At this point the best of all it is pressing. There after, it placed into a machinery in which the water and oil of paste is separated. Eventually, the filtered oil is packed into wrapper for vending.

The pictorial representation illustrate the way of in which olive You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oil
is yielded
. Starting from the picking of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 from trees and culminating to trading and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oil
 into a space. Overview This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 it conspicuous that each and every step involved in process is mandatory if any step is missed
 the whole process would halt. It is vividly
 infrared that a person took all is from tree and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 it into bucket. Followed by the balls of all is are cleaned
 by rinsing with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 water then with a system of rectangular belt it displayed on circular top machine. Furthermore
, Did you mean "it's smashing", "it is smashing", or "it was smashing"?it's smashingit is smashingit was smashing
it smashing
 in equipment which consists of two pipes. From one pipe the olive residue are thrown
 and from alternative Possible spelling mistake found.pipettepipe the
pipethe
 paste of olive is Consider using a past participle here: "come".come
came
. In the subsequent States the paste is stored
 in bag with holes. At this point the best of all it is pressing. Did you mean "thereafter" (= adverb, 'after that')?Thereafter
There after
, it placed into a machinery in which the water and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oil
 of paste is separated
. Eventually
, the filtered You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oil
is packed
 into wrapper for vending. 