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the alternations of the Queen Marry Hospital since it was constructed in 1960.

the alternations of the Queen Marry Hospital since it was constructed in 1960. eAWnp

The given maps illustrate the information about the alternations of the Queen Marry Hospital since it was constructed in 1960. Overall, This hospital had undergone a noticeable transformation after the construction takes place. The significant difference was considerable in the Pharmacy and cancer centre in 2000. According to the maps, it can be seen that in 1960, there was the main road that runs from the west to the south end to the north, with the shopping centre and hospital standing beside it. Situated to the southeast was a car parking lot, farmland was located to the southwest. After passing two decades, the hospital was extended to the wast where the shopping centre stood, around half of its size to allow for the addition of pharmacy. Next to it, located the new cancer centre, the shopping centre had gone. The farmland was replaced by the Nursing school, while the car park remained unaffected. By 2000, the cancer centre was extended to the southeast replaced the nursing school. The car park is located in the same area but its size was smaller to make room for the nursing school. However, the hospital and pharmacy remained unchanged.

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hospital
was extended
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allow
 for the addition of pharmacy. Next
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centre
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but
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make
 room for the nursing school. However
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hospital
 and pharmacy remained unchanged. 