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Which is more important in your opinion? Family or friends?

Which is more important in your opinion? Family or friends? lqoyD

We are indeed among plethora of people every day. However, sometimes we have to choose which ones are more important for us, family or friends? In my point of view, they have their own values in our life in some aspects. And in this essay, those aspects are going to be illustrated. First of all, family is our core of love. They support us in various points in our life, for example when we learn how to walk, how to talk and how to express our ideas. Sometimes, we can say that our family is the real motivation to take off. However, there some points when we are likely to avoid to discuss some issues with family members, like problems in relationship with boyfriend or girlfriend or some troubles in interaction with family members. As we have many in common with our peers, it is much easier to talk about these issues. To conclude, according to the reasons above, we had better balance the importance of both family members and friends since they have their valuable position in life.

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