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The three pie charts provide information about the expenditure done in 5 different sectors by the UK school in the years 1981, 1991 and 2001.

The three pie charts provide information about the expenditure done in 5 different sectors by the UK school in the years 1981, 1991 and 2001. rbgpJ
The given three pie charts depict the amount spent by a school in the UK annually for the years 1981, 1991 and 2001. As is observed from the pie charts, teachers’ salaries accounted for the highest percentage for both the years and insurance had the smallest proportion of money spent by the UK school in both three selected years. In 1981, 40% of the total school spending was used for teachers’ salaries and it has increased to 50% of the total amount in 1991. In 2001, the percentage dropped a little, which was 45% which was 5% higher than that in 1981. The money spent on other workers’ salaries decreased gradually from 1981 to 2001. It was initially 28% in 1981, declined to 22% in 1991 and eventually dropped to 15% in 2001. The spending on furniture and equipment and resources such as books were the same in 1981, which was 15% of the total amount. Whereas in 1991, more money spent on resources than furniture and equipment, 20% and 5% respectively, but the reverse is true for the year 2001. 23% of the spending was for the purpose of buying furniture and equipment and only 9% of the amount for the resources like books. Starting from the year 1981 to 2001, the amount spent on insurance increased steadily. Only a small proportion of money allocated for insurance in 1981, which was 2 %, increased to 3% in 1991 and 8% in 2001.
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three pie charts depict the
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amount
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spent
by a school in the UK
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for the years 1981, 1991 and 2001.

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is observed
from the pie charts, teachers’ salaries accounted for the highest percentage for both the years and insurance had the smallest proportion of
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money
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spent
by the UK school in both three selected years.

In 1981, 40% of the total school spending was
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used
for teachers’ salaries and it has increased to 50% of the total
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amount
in 1991. In 2001, the percentage dropped a
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little
, which was 45% which was 5% higher than that in 1981. The
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money
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spent
on other workers’ salaries decreased
gradually
from 1981 to 2001. It was
initially
28% in 1981, declined to 22% in 1991 and
eventually
dropped to 15% in 2001.

The spending on furniture and equipment and resources such as books were the same in 1981, which was 15% of the total
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amount
. Whereas in 1991, more
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money
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spent
on resources than furniture and equipment, 20% and 5%
respectively
,
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but
the reverse is true for the
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year
2001. 23% of the spending was for the purpose of buying furniture and equipment and
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only
9% of the
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amount
for the resources like books. Starting from the
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year
1981 to 2001, the
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amount
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spent
on insurance increased
steadily
.
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a
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small
proportion of
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allocated for insurance in 1981, which was 2 %, increased to 3% in 1991 and 8% in 2001.
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IELTS academic The three pie charts provide information about the expenditure done in 5 different sectors by the UK school in the years 1981, 1991 and 2001.

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