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When we compare the two maps with each other, we can see that big changes happened over the last 3 years.

When we compare the two maps with each other, we can see that big changes happened over the last 3 years. oRVRb
When we compare the two maps with each other, we can see that big changes happened over the last 3 years. If we take a look at the maps from the City Hospital 2007, they don’t have enough parking spaces for staff and the public. The other problem was that the car park was at the main road, close to the bus stop but too far away from the hospital. Only the main road went to the Hospital and back to the car park. If we have a look at the maps from 2010 and we compare these, we can see big differences. One of the main differences is that each member of staff has his own car park space now at the main road. There is also a big parking space close to the Hospital for the public and for who haven’t got a car there is a bus station at the main road. We can see also a difference in the road structure, they have been built roundabouts in the past 3 years for a better traffic flow around the Hospital. The changes over the past 3 years have effected the infrastructure in a positive way. For example, there are much more parking spaces around the Hospital for everybody and because of the roundabouts there would be less traffic on the roads.
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IELTS academic When we compare the two maps with each other, we can see that big changes happened over the last 3 years.

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