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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some touristic facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison whre relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some touristic facilities. 9LQL3
These are two maps of the same atoll. The former demonstrates how originally the island looked like, whereas the latter illustrates how the island resembled after the construction of a restaurant, a reception, a pier and a plethora of bungalows. On the first map, there were not any roads that came across the island and there was a remote beach in the west of it. On the second map, the atoll witnessed a number of considerable changes. First and foremost, a pier was constructed in the south of the area. Moreover, one vehicle track was created, which linked the former with the restaurant in the north of the region. Furthermore, a reception building was built in the center of the island. In addition, two main footpaths were situated in both east and west of the area. More particularly, the former one led to five bungalows next to the reception building, while the latter to six in the west. Finally, a third footpath road made the beach accessible to the public. On the whole, the construction of various tourist facilities has transformed the island into a place of outdoor entertainment. Although the beach is still the same, it is now accessible via a footpath.
These are two maps of the same atoll. The former demonstrates how
originally
the
island
looked like, whereas the latter illustrates how the
island
resembled after the construction of a restaurant, a reception, a pier and a plethora of bungalows.

On the
first
map, there were not any roads that came across the
island
and there was a remote beach in the west of it.

On the second map, the atoll witnessed a number of considerable
changes
.
First
and foremost, a pier
was constructed
in the south of the area.
Moreover
, one vehicle
track
was created
, which linked the former with the restaurant in the north of the region.
Furthermore
, a reception building
was built
in the center of the island.

In addition
, two main footpaths
were situated
in both east and west of the area. More
particularly
, the former one led to five bungalows
next
to the reception building, while the latter to six in the west.
Finally
, a third footpath road made the beach accessible to the public.

On the whole
, the construction of various tourist facilities has transformed the
island
into a place of outdoor entertainment. Although the beach is
still
the same, it is
now
accessible via a footpath.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some touristic facilities.

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