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The chart below shows the result of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

The chart below shows the result of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities NrVrN
The chart illustrates the results of an observe about Australian people’s habits of purchasing and consuming coffee or tea, approximately for month, in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart. There are three types of coffee, fresh, instant, café, in Brisbane and Adelaide coffee is not quite popular, while in remaining three cities is well know. Firstly, in Brisbane the most popular is coffee from coffee shop, a consumption is around 56%, instant coffee takes less than café’s coffee about 3% and for fresh coffee, it is not people’s favorite it takes only 34%. Adelaide’s coffee consumption is lower than Brisbane and others, citizens purchasing café and instant coffee in similar percentage, about 50%, whereas fresh coffee is the lowest popular, takes only almost 35%. In contrast, Melbourne along with Hobart have a highest percentage about 64% of coffee shop’s coffee or tea, while Sydney is around 61%. For instant coffee, Sydney takes 48% and Melbourne takes 48%, conversely Hobart is almost 55%. Fresh coffee is quite less popular, highest consumption is at Sydney similarly to instant coffee, Melbourne is 2% less than Sydney, as well as Hobart takes estimately 38%.
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or tea, approximately for month, in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart. There are three types of
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,
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, instant, café, in Brisbane and Adelaide
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is not quite
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from
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shop, a consumption is around 56%, instant
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about 3% and for
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consumption is lower than Brisbane
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in similar percentage, about 50%, whereas
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, Sydney takes 48% and Melbourne takes 48%,
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the result of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

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