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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 1515G
The given information depicts the changes in road which access to a city hospital during 2007 and 2010. Overall, it is clear that two roundabouts established during the time of period and bus station was removed. A more vivid analysis the maps reveals that there was a ring road around city hospital which maintained same position on South side. There was hospital road which leaded from north to south and bus stand located on hospital road were removed and car park for staff and public was changed into staff car park. Furthar analyzing, there was a new constructed public car park on East side near by ring road. There are 2 roundabout new constructed between hospital road, ring road and city road. Hospital road in the west side. Bus station was constructed on west side near by hospital road with renovated building.
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changes
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road
which access to a city
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hospital
during 2007 and 2010.
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, it is
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clear
that two roundabouts established during the time of period and bus station
was removed
. A more vivid analysis the maps reveals that there was a ring
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road
around city
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hospital
which maintained same position on South side. There was
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hospital
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road
which leaded from north to south and bus stand located on
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hospital
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road
were removed
and car park for staff and public was
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changed
into staff car park.
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Furthar
analyzing, there was a
Make sure that the adjective 'new' is correct. Possibly, it should be an adverb (typically ~ly) that modifies 'constructed'. Possibly, it should be the first word in a compound adjective (hyphenated adjective). Possibly, it is correct.
new constructed
public car park on East side
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near by
ring
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road
. There are 2 roundabout new constructed between
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hospital
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road
, ring
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road
and city
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road
.
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Hospital
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road
in the west side. Bus station
was constructed
on west side
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near by
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hospital
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road
with renovated building.

IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

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