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The given bar chart depicts the information about the electricity in popular ten nations which utilized and produced the electricity in 2014. Overall. It is lucid that the highest number of electricity was used and produced by China, while the Korea was used and produced lowest electricity as compared to others. Moving to detal, China was number one ranked contry which produced and consumed electricity counted as 5. 398 and 5399 in billion kwh, respectively. However, the United States weres utilized and porduced electricity less than china recorded as 4. 099 and 3, 866. The trend of used and consumed electricity was gradually decreased in Russia at 1057 and 1, 038 in billion kwh. Moneover, India produced more electricity as 871 68 billion kwh rather than electricity consumption. Probing further, in 2014, Canada came with number 6 ranked which produced and consumed electricity acounted as 618. 9 and 499. 9 Kwh. In comparison with the number of electricity France and Brazil they both of were produced and consumed same number of electricity in 2014 whilst, korea Produced and used less electricity rather than other countries in comparison.
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in 2014.

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less than china recorded as 4. 099 and 3, 866. The trend of
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IELTS academic when asked shsj she a she Ava haji aw own eye is is band vs snsjdn

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