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The chart illustrates the comparison of social media in various types of companies from 2012 to 2016.

The chart illustrates the comparison of social media in various types of companies from 2012 to 2016. Lb7KK
The chart illustrates the comparison of social media in various types of companies from 2012 to 2016. Overall, the percentage of 2016 was highest position of all companies. In addition, Large Business always got the top in social media presence in between 2012 and 2016. Small Business didn’t use generally internet to advertise companies when was 27% in 2012, 34% in 2014, the same rate was 30% in 2013 and 2015, the best was 49% in 2016. Furthermore, the better was Medium Business which got low pecentage for 30% in 2015 and was 31% in 2012, was rough at 48. 5% in 2013 and 2014, the rates still high was 52% in 2016. Large Business developed social media presence which brought a lot of revenues for companies. In first 3 three years, the percentage was tiny difference when it was approximate 78%. The highest in various types of companies in all years was still just under 80% in 2016. On the contrary, the rate social media in 2015 was least from 2012 to 2016.
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