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The map below show University Sports centre in the year 1990 and now

The map below show University Sports centre in the year 1990 and now NlNaj
The map compares the information of University sports code in the year 1990 and in present time. Overall sports code develop substantially from a park to a basketball court similarly the number of tennis court increased along with fitness centre. Having a quick glance at the map it is clearly visulized the park area for the children converted into basketball court however tennis court is built instance of car park. A Tennis Court is constructed at the left side moving for the both the cafe and the Reception area remained same in the middle. Moving forward they removed outdoor and replaced it with a indoor pool. meanwhile changing room which is below the Reception area now shifted near to fitness centre in expanded size furthermore tennis court in the sports area was demolished and developed a fitness centre in the south side.
The map compares the information of University sports code in the year 1990 and in present time.
Overall
sports code develop
substantially
from a park to a basketball
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court
similarly
the number of tennis
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court
increased along with fitness
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centre
. Having a quick glance at the map it is
clearly
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visulized
the park
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area
for the children converted into basketball
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court
however
tennis
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court
is built
instance of car park. A Tennis
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Court
is constructed
at the
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left
side moving for the both the
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cafe
and the Reception
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area
remained same in the middle. Moving forward they removed outdoor and replaced it with
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a
indoor pool.
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meanwhile
changing room which is below the Reception
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area
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now
shifted near to fitness
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centre
in expanded size
furthermore
tennis
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court
in the sports
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area
was demolished
and developed a fitness
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centre
in the south side.

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