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The map below show University Sports centre in the year 1990 and now

The map below show University Sports centre in the year 1990 and now NlNaj

The map compares the information of University sports code in the year 1990 and in present time. Overall sports code develop substantially from a park to a basketball court similarly the number of tennis court increased along with fitness centre. Having a quick glance at the map it is clearly visulized the park area for the children converted into basketball court however tennis court is built instance of car park. A Tennis Court is constructed at the left side moving for the both the cafe and the Reception area remained same in the middle. Moving forward they removed outdoor and replaced it with a indoor pool. meanwhile changing room which is below the Reception area now shifted near to fitness centre in expanded size furthermore tennis court in the sports area was demolished and developed a fitness centre in the south side.

The map compares the information of University sports code in the year 1990 and in present time. Overall
 sports code develop substantially
 from a park to a basketball You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
court
similarly
 the number of tennis You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
court
 increased along with fitness Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. Having a quick glance at the map it is clearly
Possible spelling mistake found.visualized
visulized
 the park You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 for the children converted into basketball You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
court
however
 tennis You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
court
is built
 instance of car park. A Tennis You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
Court
is constructed
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side moving for the both the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 and the Reception You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 remained same in the middle. Moving forward they removed outdoor and replaced it with Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 indoor pool. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?meanwhile,
meanwhile
 changing room which is below the Reception You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 shifted near to fitness Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 in expanded size furthermore
 tennis You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
court
 in the sports You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
was demolished
 and developed a fitness Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 in the south side. 