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wheat exports over three different areas

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The provided line graph compares the exports of wheat in three areas, namely Australia, Canada and the European Community between 1985 and 1990. Units are measured in million tonnes. Overall, it can be seen clearly from the line graph that the figure for the wheat exports in European Community saw a moderate increase, whilst there was a gradual decrease in Australia. Noticeably, the amount of wheat exports in Canada lost its dominant position to that of European Community towards the end of the period shown (from 1985 to 1990). [good] In more details, starting at around 19 million tonnes, the figure for Canada fell slowly before rising considerably and peaked at 25 million tonnes in 1988, which was distinctly higher than the others’ data. However, there was a plummet to under 15 million tonnes in 1989 and then it recovered with the data of nearly 20 million tonnes in 1990. Likewise, the amount of wheat exports in European Community, which remained stable (15 million tonnes) from 1987 to 1988, increased from 16 million to 21 million tonnes between 1985 and 1990. Good As for the data of Australia, which stood at 15 and nearly 16 million tonnes in 1985 and 1986 respectively, witnessed a slight increase. Nevertheless, the data of 16 million tonnes in 1986 and 11 million tonnes in 1989 proved that the exports of wheat in Australia dropped moderately from 1986 to 1989. In addition, a stability was experienced in this between1989 and 1990, standing at 11 million tonnes.
The provided line graph compares the
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exports
of
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wheat
in three areas,
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Australia, Canada and the European
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Community
between 1985 and 1990. Units
are measured
in
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million
tonnes.

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seen
clearly
from the line graph that the figure for the
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wheat
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exports
in European
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Community
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saw
a moderate increase, whilst there was a gradual decrease in Australia.
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, the amount of
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wheat
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exports
in Canada lost its dominant position to that of European
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Community
towards the
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end
of the period shown (from 1985 to 1990). [
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In more
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, starting at around 19
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million
tonnes, the figure for Canada fell
slowly
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before
rising
considerably
and peaked at 25
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million
tonnes in 1988, which was
distinctly
higher than the others’
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data
.
However
, there was a plummet to under 15
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million
tonnes in 1989 and then it recovered with the
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data
of
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20
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million
tonnes in 1990.
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, the amount of
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in European
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Community
, which remained stable (15
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million
tonnes) from 1987 to 1988, increased from 16
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to 21
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tonnes between 1985 and 1990.
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As for the
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of Australia, which stood at 15 and
nearly
16
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million
tonnes in 1985 and 1986
respectively
, witnessed a slight increase.
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, the
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of 16
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million
tonnes in 1986 and 11
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million
tonnes in 1989 proved that the
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exports
of
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wheat
in Australia dropped
moderately
from 1986 to 1989.
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, a stability
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in this between1989 and 1990, standing at 11
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IELTS academic wheat exports over three different areas

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6.5
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