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Wheat export (1985-1990) millions of tons

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The line graph compares the ship of wheat in three various regions between 1985 and 1990. Overall three various regions experienced various trends in the time period of 5 years. While the ship of wheat increased in Canada and European community with a number of fluctuations the export in Australia fell over time. It can be seen from the graph that the wheat export figure of Canada started from around 19 million followed by a tiny decrease of merely over 16 million tons. Afterward the amount considerably increased to 25 million tons throughout the period from 1986 to 1988 previously dramatically declining 14 million tons in 1989. On the contrary the amount witnessed an increase again to near 20 million in 1990. Regarding European communities' wheat Exports, Day shipped approximately 17 million tons of wheat at the starting point of the chart followed by a small decline to near 14 million in 1986. Then the figure started increasing slowly previously remaining constant during a period of one year between 1987 and 1988. But then The amount jumped to around 21 million tons from 1988 to 1990. By contrast, At the starting point Australia exported 15 million tonnes of wheat which increased slightly to around 16 million tones in 1986. Then the amount fell gradually to nearly 11 million tones in 1990. (217 words).
The line graph compares the ship of
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in three various regions between 1985 and 1990.

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three various regions experienced various trends in the time period of 5 years. While the ship of
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increased in Canada and European community with a number of fluctuations the export in Australia fell over time.

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from the graph that the
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export figure of Canada
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started
from around 19
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followed by a tiny decrease of
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over 16
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tons. Afterward the
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amount
considerably
increased to 25
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million
tons throughout the period from 1986 to 1988 previously
dramatically
declining 14
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million
tons in 1989.
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the
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witnessed an increase again to near 20
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in 1990. Regarding European communities'
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Exports, Day shipped approximately 17
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million
tons of
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at the starting point of the chart followed by a
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small
decline to near 14
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million
in 1986. Then the figure
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started
increasing
slowly
previously remaining constant during a period of one year between 1987 and 1988.
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then The
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jumped to around 21
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million
tons from 1988 to 1990.

By contrast, At the starting point Australia exported 15
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tonnes of
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which increased
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to around 16
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tones in 1986. Then the
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fell
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11
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tones in 1990. (217 words).
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IELTS academic Wheat export (1985-1990) millions of tons

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