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The maps illustrate how the park has changed from 1980 to the present.

The maps illustrate how the park has changed from 1980 to the present. B71R5

The maps illustrate how the park has changed from 1980 to the present. Overall, the park has seen the biggest change of the main road. In addition, several new facilities for entertainment have been built. In 1980, the main road only ran through the west gate to the south gate. There was a pond near the west gate with several benches surrounding it. Moreover, the south gate was located between two areas of the flowers and the flowers in the right hand of the gate was bigger than the other one. A big area for trees was stood in the north of the bigger flowers Now, the park has included four sides of the road. The flowers under the pond have been removed by the bush while the other also has been replaced by a new construction of the playground. Ađitionally, a new picnic area with chairs and a barbecue grill has appeared which has made narrow the area of the tree in the past.

The maps illustrate how the park has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 from 1980 to the present.

Overall
, the park has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 the biggest This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 of the main road. In addition
, several new facilities for entertainment have been built
.

In 1980, the main road This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 ran through the west You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarfenceexitdoorportdoorway
gate
 to the south You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarfenceexitdoorportdoorway
gate
. There was a pond near the west You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarfenceexitdoorportdoorway
gate
 with several benches surrounding it. Moreover
, the south You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarfenceexitdoorportdoorway
gate
was located
 between two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 of the flowers and the flowers in the right hand of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbarfenceexitdoorportdoorway
gate
 was bigger than the other one. A This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 for trees was stood
 in the north of the bigger flowers

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, the park has included four sides of the road. The flowers under the pond have been removed
 by the bush while the other also
 has been replaced
 by a new construction of the playground. Ađitionally
, a new picnic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 with chairs and a barbecue grill has appeared which has made narrow the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 of the tree in the past. 