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What’s your favorite tv program? Why? Are there any programs you don’t like? Will you watch fewer or more tv programs in the future?

What’s your favorite tv program? Why? Are there any programs you don’t like? Will you watch fewer or more tv programs in the future? d5LBK
I usually watch tv at home while sitting at dinner table, despite my family objections especially my teenage daughters. I have been asked most of the time being questioned by them what the benefit of watching daily news at dinner time and maybe they are completely right. Unfortunately to lack of time I prefer to take care of important news at dinner time. Watching and listening to news make me updated and find out the economic facts confronting the society in near future and that is the only reason I try to follow the news every day. I am not really interested in watching movies with social topics, better to say I am not in favor of social dramas. According to the cyberspace expanse, it has been tested and approved that this space will be a desirable substitution for the social medias like Tv, Radios, etc. and for sure people including me will spend much time in that kind of space rather than watching Tv.
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at home while sitting at dinner table, despite my family objections
especially
my teenage daughters. I have
been asked
most of the
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time
being questioned
by them what the benefit of watching daily
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news
at dinner
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time
and maybe they are completely right. Unfortunately to lack of
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time
I prefer to take care of
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important
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news
at dinner time.

Watching and listening to
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news
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make
me updated and find out the economic facts confronting the society in near future and
that is
the
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only
reason I try to follow the
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news
every day.

I am not
really
interested in watching movies with social topics, better to say I am not in favor of social dramas.

According to the cyberspace expanse, it has been
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tested
and approved that this space will be a desirable substitution for the social medias like
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Tv
, Radios, etc. and for sure
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people
including me will spend much
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time
in that kind of space
rather
than watching
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Tv
.
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IELTS academic What’s your favorite tv program? Why? Are there any programs you don’t like? Will you watch fewer or more tv programs in the future?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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