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The pie charts reveals the annual income and expenditure of a children’s study in the USA.

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The pie charts reveals the annual income and expenditure of a children’s study in the USA. In an overview, it can be seen that donated food contributes the huge part of revenue resources while, programme services accounted for the greater part of the expenses. Total income just overlapping the expenses. In depth, the donated food had a greater role in revenue resources, they accounted 86. 6%. Likewise, the programme services utilises the majority of the outgoing at 95. 8%. The contributions from other resources are much smaller. Community contribution were the second largest resources of total income that provide 10. 4%. Subsequently, programme revenue donate about 22% total income. Other 3 resources such as investment income, government grants and other income give up much smaller part of the total revenue resources it brought merely 0. 8% combined. In regards to expenses, there were only two other items, that is fundraising and management and general it occupies a 2. 6% and 1. 67 of total cost the total amount of income was 53, 561, 580 were just balanced with the total expenses of 53, 224, 896.
The pie charts reveals the annual
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and expenditure of a children’s study in the USA.

In an overview, it can be
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seen
that donated food contributes the huge part of
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revenue
resources while,
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programme
services accounted for the greater part of the expenses.
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Total
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income
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just
overlapping the expenses.

In depth, the donated food had a greater role in
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revenue
resources, they accounted 86. 6%.
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, the
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programme
services
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utilises
the majority of the outgoing at 95. 8%. The contributions from
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other
resources are much smaller. Community contribution were the second largest resources of
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total
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income
that provide 10. 4%.
Subsequently
,
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programme
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donate about 22%
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income
.
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3 resources such as investment
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income
,
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government
grants and
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other
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give up much smaller part of the
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total
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resources it brought
merely
0. 8% combined.

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two
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items,
that is
fundraising and management and general it occupies a 2. 6% and 1. 67 of
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cost the
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total
amount of
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income
was 53, 561, 580 were
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balanced with the
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expenses of 53, 224, 896.
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IELTS academic The pie charts reveals the annual income and expenditure of a children’s study in the USA.

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